Last school holiday, my family and I went back to our hometown, the
eagerly-awaited holidays bring a respite from homework, lessons,
extracurricular activities and exams. For me, spending a holiday at home is
equally unbearable.
0n the last day of school, I eagerly waited for the bell to ring at 1:10
p.m.. Then, I felt like a caged bird hat has just been set free. I slang my bag
over my shoulder and make a beeline for the bust station. My hometown!
We started our journey early in the morning. When we arrived, we had a
quick lunch. I make a short exchange and headed for my favourite spot here- a
secluded corner of my grandfather durian orchards. There under a shady spot, I
sat down a surveyed the surroundings.
Here, far away from claustrophobic classrooms, rushing crowds, busy
sidewalks and congested streets, I enjoyed the solitude of nature. As I took my
seat on a flimsy woody bench, and looked around me, I can see a flurry of
activities. Birds flew gracefully and noiselessly above me while bees traveled
flirtatiously from tree to tree, colourful butterflies flit about here and there flapping their
fragile wings and ants scurry in a single file carrying bits of food on their
tiny backs.
A soft cool breeze blowed. I can
hear the soft rustle of leaves. The air is heavy with the scent of shrubs and
grasses coupled with the scent of ripe durians.
I lied on my back with my hand
clasped behind my head and watched streaks of sunlight filtering through the
canopy of leaves. Soon I fall into short but deep slumber. When I woke up, I
can see the sun slowly descending behind a row of far hills. Although I would
love to linger for a little longer, I moved away reluctantly and leaved knowing
that Opah would be waiting for me.
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